
Yuzhi and I worked together to create the first paragraph.
Then I wrote the rest of it and she fixed my grammer.
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This Valentino midi-dress is sleeveless with a fitted bodice cinched in by a silver-toned buckle. The top half of the bodice is sheer with a bib-shaped ruffle front and a tie at the center of the neckline. The skirt is pleated at the waist with a slight flare and a fuzzy overlay that falls several inches above the hem.
I like this dress because while the tailored bodice, the ruffled-front and the tie convey demure elegance, the sheer part of the top, partially covered by the ruffled-bib and the tie, makes the whole garment look subtly sexy. The fuzzy overlay also adds a bit of edge that helps to create an even more interesting look.
If I were to redesign this dress, I would keep the basic fitted-and-flare silhouette. The overlay of the skirt, the ruffled bib and the tie can stay, too. The major change in shape would be a fuller skirt to make the contrast between the upper and lower body more dramatic. Three-quarter length sheer Chiffon sleeves will be added so that the dress is less revealing but still sexy as well as sophisticated. Other revisions include adding colors and patterns and bringing in different kinds of fabrics to make the overall look more eclectic and patchwork-like.
The features of the new dress are as follows:
• *More pleats at waistline and a fuller skirt made of brown pin-striped cotton.
• *An overlay that’s the same size as the original but made of purple sheer Chiffon.
• *Three-quarter length sleeves made of purple sheer Chiffon and embroidered with small eyelet flowers. The cuffs will be purple, too, and in the same fuzzy material that was used for the overlay of the original dress.
• *The neck and waistline covered by a band of dark red jewel-toned velvet, which will also be used to make the neck tie.
• *The silver buckle replaced by a small rectangular piece of black suede with sequins on it.
• *The original bodice that consists of upper/lower parts to be replaced by one made of a whole piece of light grey satin. The same material will be used to make the ruffled-bib.